car removal

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Dear teachers

Could you proofread these?


  1. Do not park in front of the garage, car may be removed, driver may get shot, my English is bad but my sight is good.
  2. Do not park inside the garage, car subjected to winch, driver subjected to get shot at, my English is bad but my sight is good.

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#1 is ok
#2:Do not park inside the garage, car subject to being towed, driver subject to getting shot, my English is bad but my sight is good.
 
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