Centering around the proposed Padma bridge...

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Centering around the proposed Padma bridge, the economy of south-western area is changing. Considering the future initiatives, businessmen are purchasing land near the proposed bridge area. A number of small industries have already been established in the areas adjacent to the project. The businessmen think that if the construction of the bridge is completed and the supply of gas is ensured, the number of industries near the project areas will mushroom. Keeping the Padma bridge in mind, the entrepreneurs has been taking initiatives for the last five years to establish industries in different places of south-western regions of the country. It is expected that the total Gross Domestic Product will increase by 1.2% because of the industries which have already been established considering the prospects of proposed Padma bridge in the south-western regions.
 

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[STRIKE]Centering[/STRIKE] Centered around the proposed Padma bridge, the economy of the south-western area is changing (flourishing). Considering the [STRIKE]future initiatives[/STRIKE] potential for development, businessmen are purchasing land near the proposed bridge [STRIKE]area[/STRIKE]. A number of small industries have already been established in the areas adjacent to the project. The businessmen think that if the construction of the bridge is completed and the supply of gas is ensured, the number of industries [STRIKE]near the project areas[/STRIKE] around the area will mushroom. Keeping the Padma bridge in mind, the entrepreneurs [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] have been taking initiatives for the last five years to establish industries in different places [STRIKE]of south-western regions of the country[/STRIKE]in the area. It is expected that the [STRIKE]total [/STRIKE]gross domestic product will increase by 1.2% because of the industries which have already been established considering the prospects of (in anticipation of the completion of the) proposed Padma bridge [STRIKE]in the south-western regions.[/STRIKE]

It is unnecessary to repeat "in the south-western region/area" after you have stated once that it is next to the bridge.
 
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