Correct the sentences please?

[bspkumar]

Could you please tell me the correct sentence in the following sentences?
If both were wrong, suggest me best way to construct the sentence.

Thank you.

1.This movie is about a young woman from an orthodox Hindu family, called Deepthi who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure from her family.

2.This movie is about a young woman called Deepthi from an orthodox Hindu family who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure form her family.

 

[bhaisahab]

Could you please tell me the correct sentence in the following sentences?
If both were wrong, suggest me best way to construct the sentence.

Thank you.

1.This movie is about a young woman from an orthodox Hindu family, called Deepthi who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure from her family.

2.This movie is about a young woman called Deepthi, from an orthodox Hindu family, who marries a young business man against her will due to the pressure form her family.

#2 is OK, I think it's better with the commas.

 

[Khosro]

It is "businessman". No blank between "business" and "man".

 

[bspkumar]

Thank you all for the reply.