dialogue partners

[keannu]

[FONT=&#48148] I feel very good when I’m in camping. There, yummy foods, friends, and dialogue partners make me feel comfortable.
My neighbors also likes it so I usually go camping with them.

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[tedmc]

1. Delete "in". Or say: when I am on a camping trip".

2. I would replace "there," with "the".

3."Dialog partners" sounds a bit formal. How about something abstract like "togetherness/bonding "? "Friends" and "dialog partners" mean the same thing.

4. My neighbous also like camping so I usually go with them.

 

[keannu]

What about "conversation partners" for 3?

1. Delete "in". Or say: when I am on a camping trip".

2. I would replace "there," with "the".

3."Dialog partners" sounds a bit formal. How about something abstract like "togetherness/bonding "? "Friends" and "dialog partners" mean the same thing.

4. My neighbous also like camping so I usually go with them.

 

[tedmc]

What about "conversation partners" for 3?

Yes, that would be better.

 

[Tarheel]

Camping together

I feel very good when I'm camping. When I'm camping, the yummy foods, friends, and people to talk to make me feel good.
My neighbors also like it, so I usually go camping with them.

My suggestions.

 

[Tarheel]

Re: Camping together

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