Diary - A couple of month ago, I had an eye check-up

[Maybo]

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A couple of months ago, I had an eye check-up in the hospital. An optometrist told me that I didn't need to get a new pair of eye glasses because my vision was good and my nearsightedness had just got worse a little. Interestingly, the optometrist in an optical store advised that I need to wear a pair of eye glasses that matches my prescription completely. I suspect they just wanted me to buy new eye glasses so I ignored him. Over the past years, I've found that every time I wear a new pair of eye glasses that completely matches my prescription, my eye vision get worse quickly, so I'd rather wear my current eye glasses.

 

[Rover_KE]

For a start, after the first use of the word ‘eye’, you can delete every other repetition of the word.

 

[Maybo]

Revised:
A couple of months ago, I had an eye check-up in the hospital. An optometrist told me that I didn't need to get a new pair of glasses because my vision was good and my nearsightedness had just got worse a little. Interestingly, the optometrist in an optical store advised that I need to wear a pair of glasses that matches my prescription completely. I suspect they just wanted me to buy new glasses so I ignored him. Over the past years, I've found that every time I wear a new pair of glasses that completely matches my prescription, my vision get worse quickly, so I'd rather wear my current glasses.

 

[emsr2d2]

A couple of months ago, I had an eye check-up in at [the] hospital. An The optometrist told me that I didn't need to get a new pair of glasses because my vision was good and my nearsightedness had just got a little worse. a little. Interestingly, the optometrist in an optical store at an optician's advised me that I need to wear a pair of glasses that matches exactly match my prescription. completely. I suspect they he just wanted me to buy new glasses so I ignored him. Over the past few years, I've found that every time I wear a new pair of glasses that completely matches my prescription, my vision quickly gets worse, quickly, so I'd rather wear my current glasses.

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