Diary entry - Recently, I've been online shopping.

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Maybo

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Recently, I've been online shopping. My mother saw that I often got parcels and asked me to buy fewer things. I didn't buy many. I just did my usual shopping but that made her feel like I spent a lot of money. Therefore, I came up with an idea. I take notice of what my mother wants. Wait until the right time, I then ask my mother if she wants to buy the thing she wants, and I can take this opportunity to buy my thing. When the parcel comes, she won't notice I have bought my thing.
 

emsr2d2

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I don't have time for any more as I'm rushing to work but here's one thing - open with "Recently, I've been shopping online".
 

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Recently, I've been online shopping online. My mother saw that I often got received parcels and asked me to buy fewer things for my purchases, and told me to cut down on it . I actually didn't buy many that much. I just did my usual shopping but that made her feel like she got the impression that I buy a lot and spent a lot of money. Therefore, So I came up with an idea. I take notice of observe what my mother wants and wait until for the right time, I then ask my mother if she wants to buy the thing she wants, and I can take this opportunity to buy my thing. When the parcel comes, she won't notice I have bought my thing. I would then ask her if she wants to buy the things she has in mind, and I would place my orders at the same time. When the things are delivered at the same time, she would not notice the things that I buy.
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emsr2d2

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Recently, I've been online shopping online. My mother saw has noticed that I often got get/receive parcels and asked me to buy fewer things. I didn't don't buy many much. I just did do my usual shopping but that made the parcels make her feel like think/believe I spent spend a lot of money no full stop here Therefore, so I came up with an idea. I take notice make a note of what things my mother wants. I wait until the right time, I then then I ask my mother if she wants is [actually] going to buy the thing she wants. If not, and I can take this the opportunity to buy order what she wants and I add my thing something I want. When the parcel comes, she won't doesn't notice I have bought myself something.
 
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