Diary - I started to use my new Kindle yesterday

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I started to use my new Kindle yesterday and noticed that my reactions to it has been quite different from reading books. Every time I'm reading a book, I yawn and have water eyes. However, when I use Kindle, I don't have those problems. Maybe while I'm using it, my brain is deceptively thinking that I'm just browsing a smartphone.

 

[Tarheel]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I started to use my new Kindle yesterday and noticed that my reactions to it HAVE been quite different from reading books. Every time I READ a book, I yawn and have waterY eyes. However, when I use Kindle, I don't have those problems. Maybe while I'm using it, my brain is deceptively thinking that I'm just browsing a smartphone.

Are you allergic to books?

One of my allergy symptoms is watery eyes.

I know "Are you allergic to books" seems like an odd question, but why would your eyes water otherwise?

 

[Maybo]

why would your eyes water otherwise

I don’t know if it causes by “yawn”.

 

[emsr2d2]

I started to use my new Kindle yesterday and noticed that my reactions body reacts differently to it has been quite different from when I'm reading books. Every time I'm reading I read a book, I yawn and have my eyes water. eyes. However, when I use the/my Kindle, I don't have those problems. Maybe while I'm using it, my brain is deceptively is deceived into thinking that I'm just browsing a smartphone.

I don’t know if it's causes caused by “yawn” yawning.

 

[Tarheel]

I don’t know if it causes by “yawn”.

Try:

Maybe it's caused by my yawning.

I think your body works in some strange ways.

 

[tedmc]

On the contrary, I find reading from a smartphone more straining to the eyes than reading from a book. I believe that's why it's more common for children nowadays to have vision problems at an early age.

 

[emsr2d2]

On the contrary, I find reading from a smartphone more straining to the eyes than reading from a book. I believe that's why it's more common for children nowadays to have vision problems at an early age.

That's your experience but that doesn't mean you can say "On the contrary" about this subject. That usually precedes an explanation of why the previous statement is factually incorrect. That's not the case here - you're just giving a difference of opinion.

 

[tedmc]

That's your experience but that doesn't mean you can say "On the contrary" about this subject. That usually precedes an explanation of why the previous statement is factually incorrect. That's not the case here - you're just giving a difference of opinion.

Well, it is not just my experience but it is a well-known fact that reading from a smartphone is more straining than reading from a printed book

 

[Piscean]

If you are presenting it as a fact, it's On the contrary, I find reading from a smartphone is more straining to the eyes than reading from a book.

 

[Maybo]

On the contrary, I find reading from a smartphone more straining to the eyes than reading from a book. I believe that's why it's more common for children nowadays to have vision problems at an early age.

Do you mean you think that I like using smartphone to read books more? No, I like physic books more. My watery eyes was caused by yawning, and my yawning results from my brain thinking that reading books is boring. Therefore, when I use Kindle, my brain might be deceived into thinking I'm browsing my phone or playing games.

 

[emsr2d2]

Do you mean you think that I like using a smartphone to read books more than physical books? No, I like physical books more. My watery eyes was were caused by yawning, and my yawning results from my brain thinking that reading books is boring. Therefore, when I use a/my Kindle, my brain might be deceived into thinking I'm browsing my phone or playing games.