ambitious-girl
Senior Member
- Joined
- Apr 29, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
I would be appreciate it if someone could check this paragraph for any mistakes.
There are several differences between the United States and Iran. America is leading industrialized, the most advanced and developed country while Iran is considered as a third world and developing one/nation. Unlike/In contrast to Iran, America is known to be the land of opportunities, where everyone can achieve whatever they set their mind to. Thousands of people immigrate to this country every year from different parts of the world to have access to such opportunities. Iran has a mono-culture society, where you rarely see people from different cultural and racial backgrounds, except from Afghans. Racial and cultural diversity, however, is the United States’ strengths, where there is a cosmopolitan atmosphere in almost every state. When it come to freedom of speech, expression, press and religion, Iran is rated as 175th country in the world. By contrast, America is also known for being at the forefront of freedom and equality. In Iran, a baby born out of wedlock is a horrible sin for which there is no forgiveness whereas it is really commonplace in America, which is such permissive society.
Thanks in advance
There are several differences between the United States and Iran. America is leading industrialized, the most advanced and developed country while Iran is considered as a third world and developing one/nation. Unlike/In contrast to Iran, America is known to be the land of opportunities, where everyone can achieve whatever they set their mind to. Thousands of people immigrate to this country every year from different parts of the world to have access to such opportunities. Iran has a mono-culture society, where you rarely see people from different cultural and racial backgrounds, except from Afghans. Racial and cultural diversity, however, is the United States’ strengths, where there is a cosmopolitan atmosphere in almost every state. When it come to freedom of speech, expression, press and religion, Iran is rated as 175th country in the world. By contrast, America is also known for being at the forefront of freedom and equality. In Iran, a baby born out of wedlock is a horrible sin for which there is no forgiveness whereas it is really commonplace in America, which is such permissive society.
Thanks in advance