[General] Do you have time? Shall we.....

[Silverobama]

This dialog was between my friend Amy and I.

Silver: Hey, Amy. How have you been?
Amy: Good.
Silver: Do you have time? Shall we go eat pizza tonight together?

Is my italic sentence natural?

 

[emsr2d2]

This dialog was between my friend Amy and [STRIKE]I[/STRIKE] me.

Silver: Hey, Amy. How have you been?
Amy: Good.
Silver: Do you have time [STRIKE]? Shall we[/STRIKE] to go and/to eat pizza [STRIKE]tonight[/STRIKE] together tonight?

Is my italic sentence natural?

See above.

 

[Yankee]

This dialog was between my friend Amy and me.

Silver: Hey, Amy. How have you been?
Amy: Good.
Silver: Do you have time? Shall we go eat pizza tonight together?

Is my italic sentence natural?

It's OK, but more common would be "Should we go eat.....".

 

[5jj]

It's OK, but more common would be "Should we go eat.....".

Not where I come from.

 

[Rover_KE]

Not in British English.