[General] Does this sentence make sense?

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Hello,

I am writing a letter. so may I begin it with 'Many sorry for disturbing you, although I know you must be very busy after vacation.'

Does it make sense? I kind of feel that 'although' is not a proper connection to be used between these two sentences. But I don't know which one is better.

Look forward to your advice.

Thank you.
Miao

ps. may I say 'although' is not a proper connection to be used here; or I should have said 'although' is not a proper connection should be used here.
 
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Welcome!

I am writing a letter. so may I begin it with
'(I am very)(Very) sorry for disturbing you, because I know you must be very busy after your vacation.' :tick:

You cannot say "Many sorry". "sorry" is an adjective, so it can only be modified by an adverb, such as 'very'.

Does it make sense? I kind of feel that 'although' is not a proper connection to be used between these two sentences.
1. You have only one sentence, not two.

2. You are right; "although" is not a good conjunction there. 'because' would be suitable there, or you could avoid a conjunction by using punctuation.

a) I am very sorry to disturb you, because I know you must be very busy after your vacation. :tick:
b) I am very sorry to disturb you; I know you must be.......... :tick:
c) I am very sorry to disturb you. I know you must be........... :tick:





I look forward to your advice.

Thank you.
Miao

ps. may I say 'although' is not a proper connection to be used here; Yes, you can.

or I should have said 'although' is not a proper connection should be used here. :cross:
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Hello 2006, thank you for correcting my wording (I hope 'wording' is a proper word to be used here).

I have another unsure sentence; may I say ' I received a letter from government office last week and was required to do sth'. or I should say '...and they required me to do sth'?
 

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Hello 2006, thank you for correcting my wording (I hope 'wording' is a proper word to be used here). Yes, it is.

I have another sentence I am unsure about; may I say '
I received a letter from (a)(the) government office last week, which required me to do something. :tick:
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