Does this sound native? If not, please make it one

[NewHopeR]

The man has the Patrician look and the grace and dignified posture coupled with an imposing appearance; he defies belittlement.

 

[billmcd]

The man has [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] a Patrician look, [STRIKE]and the [/STRIKE] grace and a dignified posture coupled with an imposing appearance; he defies belittlement.

b.

 

[NewHopeR]

b.

Cool.
Thank you.

 

[Rover_KE]

Patrician is not capitalised (except when it begins a sentence).

 

[SoothingDave]

It's a nice sentence, but I don't think I know anyone who ever used the word "patrician."

 

[5jj]

It's a nice sentence, but I don't think I know anyone who ever used the word "patrician."

Well, you know me now. :hi:

 

[SoothingDave]

And an honour it is. ;-)

 

[Rover_KE]

Have any natives here said 'He defies belittlement'?

 

[JohnParis]

No :-D, and I would also like to ask the threadstarter (that's you NewHopeR) if you would please stop referring to native English speakers as "natives" (a person born in a specified place or associated with a place by birth).
Your question should be titled: "Does this sound natural?" or "Does this sound natural to a native speaker?"
Thank you in advance.
John

 

[5jj]

Have any natives here said 'He defies belittlement'?

Never - and this from a 'patrician'-user.