Dear teachers, I am writing my first college essay and I was wondering if you could look over it and tell me what you think about it so far.
Welcome to the forum. :hi:
As you will see from the forum rules, we cannot help with homework or assignments. You must write the best essay you can without any help and submit it to your teacher. After your teacher returns it, you can come back to us if there are any corrections or comments that you don't understand (after you ask your teacher to explain them!)
Good luck with your first essay.