Rachel Adams
Key Member
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
Hello.
These two paragraphs are my answers to one of the questions for ESL students.
A woman's husband is in prison. Do you think she should tell her little son where his father is? The woman does not want to tell him the truth.
"For me she is totally right and she shouldn't tell the truth to her son for several reasons. First of all, the 6 year's old child's psychology is not ready to accept this kind of information. In addition, she knows that her husband may be soon released."
I edited the first paragraph and removed "for me."
"She is totally right. I think she shouldn't tell her son the truth for several reasons. First of all, a 6/six-year-old child's psyche is not ready to accept this kind of information. In addition, quite possibly her husband will be soon released."
These two paragraphs are my answers to one of the questions for ESL students.
A woman's husband is in prison. Do you think she should tell her little son where his father is? The woman does not want to tell him the truth.
"For me she is totally right and she shouldn't tell the truth to her son for several reasons. First of all, the 6 year's old child's psychology is not ready to accept this kind of information. In addition, she knows that her husband may be soon released."
I edited the first paragraph and removed "for me."
"She is totally right. I think she shouldn't tell her son the truth for several reasons. First of all, a 6/six-year-old child's psyche is not ready to accept this kind of information. In addition, quite possibly her husband will be soon released."