eye infection

[Ju]

a. Mimi gets eye infection. She cannot open her eyes once looking at the sunlight and all light in bright one colour. It's not hurting but I always feel like something stuck in my eye.


Is my writing in proper grammar?
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b. Mimi's boss doesn't say a word of comfort on Mimi's sickness while the rest of the colleagues from other departments approached Mimi to show their concern.

1. Any simple phrases or word to describe the attitude of Mimi's boss?


2. Any simple phrases or word to describe the attitude of Mimi's colleagues?

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ju

 

[epimenides3]

a. Mimi gets eye infection. She cannot open her eyes once looking at the sunlight and all light in bright one colour. It's not hurting but I always feel like something stuck in my eye.

Is my writing in proper grammar?

Mimi has an eye infection. She cannot open her eyes while she is looking at the sunlight. She sees all light as a single bright colour. It's not hurting, but she feels as if somthing is stuck in her eye.

b. Mimi's boss doesn't say a word of comfort on Mimi's sickness while the rest of the colleagues from other departments approached Mimi to show their concern.

1. Any simple phrases or word to describe the attitude of Mimi's boss?

unsympathetic, uncaring, unkind, heartless

Any simple phrases or word to describe the attitude of Mimi's colleagues?

sympathetic, caring, kind