get on a train long time

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Hello.:-D

One of my students wrote in her writing assignment:

1. I visited my uncle in Hokkaido last year.
2. I have to get on a train long time to go there.
3. I enjoyed skiing there with my family.
4. It is difficult for me to do.
5. But I thought I want to do again.

#2 should be:
"I had to ride a train for a long time to go/get there."

Am I correct?
(#5 is questionable. I'd like to ask a question about it later.)
 
'I had a long train ride to get there.'
 
It took a long time to get there on the train.
 
Thank you, Rover and ems, for the natural English expressions.
Does "ride a train for a long time" sound unnatural?

Thank you again.:-D
 
In BrE, yes, it sounds unnatural. We don't use the phrase "ride the train/bus".
 
Hello.:-D

One of my students wrote in her writing assignment:

1. I visited my uncle in Hokkaido last year.
2. I have to get on a train long time to go there.
3. I enjoyed skiing there with my family.
4. It is difficult for me to do.
5. But I thought I want to do again.

#2 should be:
"I had to ride a train for a long time to go/get there."

Am I correct?
(#5 is questionable. I'd like to ask a question about it later.)

For #5, "But I thought I'd like to do it again" is better.
 
4 might be better in the past tense. In 5, you could use I think I'd like... too.
 
In BrE, yes, it sounds unnatural. We don't use the phrase "ride the train/bus".


Yet another thing I've learned here. That's entirely normal sounding to me.
 
2. I have to get on a train long time to go there.
3. I enjoyed skiing there with my family.
Note the potential ambiguity here. If this was meant to be a story rather than a list of discrete sentences, the effect could be "I thought the train journey to Hokkaido was too long, but I enjoyed skiing there with my family." That is, 'there' can mean "at Hokkaido" or "to Hokkaido".
Just an observation.
 
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