Guidelines to the company

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poongodi

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I want to give guidelines to the company for uploading their employees salary.
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We inform you that the existing procedure for your salary upload was changed.i have enclosed a file containing step by step procedure s to be followed for your perusal.Hence I advise you to read the procedure and follow the guidelines accordingly.
 

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First, edit your post so that the word "I" is capitalised every time it's written, and add a space after every full stop. Remove the space between the "e" and the "s" of "procedures".
 

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I want to give guidelines to the company for uploading their employees salary.
Sir,
We inform you that the existing procedure for your salary upload was changed. I have enclosed a file containing step by step procedures to be followed for your perusal. Hence I advise you to read the procedure and follow the guidelines accordingly.
 
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I want to [STRIKE]give guidelines[/STRIKE] provide guidelines to the company for uploading their employees' salaries.

Dear Sir,

We wish to inform you that the existing procedure for uploading your salary figures to the system has been [STRIKE]upload was[/STRIKE] changed. I have [STRIKE]enclosed[/STRIKE] attached a file containing the new step-by-step procedure to be followed. [STRIKE]for your perusal. Hence I advise you to[/STRIKE] Please read the procedure and follow the guidelines accordingly.
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What is the difference between 'was changed' and 'has been changed'. Please explain
 
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First, please do what emsr2d2 asked you to do in post #2.

Then edit your post #5, following the same guidelines.
 
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