He doesn't deserve this.

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alpacinou

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Is this correct and natural?

He doesn't deserve this. He doesn't deserve this. Her conscience was whispering to her all night.
 

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Is this correct and natural?

He doesn't deserve this. He doesn't deserve this. Her conscience was whispering to her all night.

How are the sentences related? I prefer "conscience was haunting her".
 

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I want to know if "conscience was whispering to her" works.
 
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