[Essay] Hello dears. Can you check my motivation letter for Semester Exchange Programme

Otamurod

New member
Joined
May 12, 2020
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Uzbek
Home Country
Uzbekistan
Current Location
Uzbekistan
[My name]
[My address]

12 May, 2020

IUBH Admissions Committee
IUBH Admissions Office
[Office address]

Dear IUBH Admissions Committee,
I am really interested in participating in your Semester Exchange Programme for the upcoming academic year. I see this as a great chance to gain valuable experience outside my comfort zone.

Currently I am a Freshman student in the field of IT. My specialist subjects require me to develop my critical and logical thinking skills to learn and understand the main concepts of programming languages. Achieving IT-focused skills is such a large area of study, it cannot be taught only through lectures and doing lab projects during a week. The enthusiasm of being the master of my profession in the future made me desired candidate for this exchange programme, because I am keen on building useful computer and mobile software apps. I believe this exchange programme will be full of experiences which can make me open-minded person in my current field of study.

Having finished my research in terms of international semester exchange program I decided to study computer science at IUBH (University of Applied Sciences) for mixture of reasons. First of all, I should mention that IUBH provides students high quality education, so the leading university ranked first in Europe and third in the world. Secondly, it attracted me that there are 8 unique benefits for IUBH students such as access to a strong economy, additional job opportunities, open society, immigration and working rights, perfect environment, guaranteed accommodation, personal attention, and premium services. Additionally, this is a wonderful opportunity to meet new students and professors from 100 nations, understand cultures and make new friends from around the world.

As a hard-worker student, I have learned some popular programming languages like C++, HTML, CSS, Python, and fundamentals of Java during my first year at IUT( INHA University in Tashkent). Alongside my studies I have also learned leadership skills during my time as the head of four students who were improving the concepts of several engineering designs with me. I followed my favourite professors to get their feedbacks.
Furthermore, the recommendations of professors the demanded me ,firstly, to be dynamic and flexible. Because we meet with a lot of people who have different abilities, worldviews, and approaches to something in both our life and future career. While I was working with a team to menage the members as a leader, I trained myself to persist my outbursts. I have learned over the years of my study that human understands that the more they study, the more they know what they actually know little bit knowledge . Those events interested me to be more and more skilled person in both my study and future career.

Taking into the consideration of my knowledge and practical experience I believe that I can add valid value to your programme and share my skills with other participants. I hope the power of exchange experience will enhance my future career in the field of Computer Science. I will do my best to adjust to the facilities of the university. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you very much for your reading.

Yours sincerely,
[My name]
 
Last edited by a moderator:

tedmc

VIP Member
Joined
Apr 16, 2014
Member Type
Interested in Language
Native Language
Chinese
Home Country
Malaysia
Current Location
Malaysia
[My name]
[My address]

12 May, 2020

IUBH Admissions Committee
IUBH Admissions Office
[Office address]

Dear [STRIKE]IUBH Admissions Committee[/STRIKE] Sir/Madam,

I am really interested in participating in your Semester Exchange Programme for the upcoming academic year. I see this as a great [STRIKE]chance[/STRIKE] opportunity to gain valuable experience outside my comfort zone.

Currently I am a freshman [STRIKE]student[/STRIKE] in [STRIKE]the field of IT[/STRIKE] information technology at the university of ???. [STRIKE]My specialist subjects[/STRIKE] The specialist subjects that I take require me to develop my critical and logical thinking skills to learn and understand the main concepts of programming languages. Achieving IT-focused skills is such a large area of study that [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] cannot be taught only through lectures and doing lab projects during [STRIKE]a week[/STRIKE]. The enthusiasm of being [STRIKE]the master[/STRIKE] in the forefront of my profession in the future made me a desired candidate for this exchange programme, because I am keen on building useful computer and mobile software apps. I believe this exchange programme will [STRIKE]be full [/STRIKE] provide the [STRIKE]of [/STRIKE]experiences [STRIKE]which can[/STRIKE] to make me an accomplished and open-minded person in my current field of study.

Having finished my research in terms of international semester exchange program (be consistent with your spelling) I decided to study computer science at IUBH (University of Applied Sciences) for [STRIKE]mixture [/STRIKE] number of reasons. First of all, I should mention that IUBH provides students with a high quality education, [STRIKE]so[/STRIKE] being the leading university ranked first in Europe and third in the world. Secondly[STRIKE],[STRIKE] it attracted me that there are I am attracted by the [STRIKE] 8 [/STRIKE] eight unique benefits for IUBH students such as access to a strong economy, additional job opportunities, an open society, immigration and working rights, a perfect environment, guaranteed accommodation, personal attention, and premium services. Additionally, this is a wonderful opportunity to meet new students and professors from 100 (a hundred) nations, understand cultures and make new friends from around the world.

As a hard-[STRIKE]worker[/STRIKE] working student, I have learned some popular programming languages like C++, HTML, CSS, Python, and fundamentals of Java during my first year at IUT( INHA University in Tashkent). Alongside my studies, I have also learned leadership skills during my time as the head of a group of four students who were [STRIKE]improving[/STRIKE] learning the concepts of several engineering designs with me. I followed up with my favourite professors to get their feedbacks.
Furthermore, the recommendations of professors [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]demanded[/STRIKE] required me ,firstly, to be dynamic and flexible. Because we [STRIKE]meet[/STRIKE] intereact with a lot of people who have different abilities, worldviews, and approaches to something in both our life and future career. While I was working with a team to menage the members as a leader, I trained myself to [STRIKE]persist my outbursts[/STRIKE] to be perseverant. I have learned over the years of my study [STRIKE]that human understands[/STRIKE] that the more [STRIKE]they[/STRIKE] we study, the more [STRIKE]they know what they actually know little bit knowledge [/STRIKE] we realise how little we know in the realm of knowledge. Those [STRIKE]events interested [/STRIKE] experiences made me to be [STRIKE]more and more skilled[/STRIKE] a more mature person in both my study and future career.

Taking into the consideration of my knowledge and practical experience, I believe that I can contribute and add [STRIKE]valid [/STRIKE]value to your programme and share my skills with other participants. I hope the power of the exchanging of experience will enhance my future career in the field of computer science. I will do my best to adjust to the facilities of the university. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you very much for [STRIKE]your[/STRIKE] reading my letter.

Yours sincerely,
[My name]

See above.
 
Last edited:
Top