Help me with this sentence

[heyuting]

Is that correct If I say "

Think about Bill Gates, Warren Buffett，why they are widely well-known? It's money make them famous.​

"

 

[Barb_D]

Is that correct If I say "

Think about Bill Gates, Warren Buffett，Why they are widely [strike]well-[/strike]known? It's money that makes them famous.​

"

Either well-known or widely known (no hyphen with a work that ends in -ly).
that makes them, or that has made them.

You don't think a little company called Microsoft might have made Bill Gates a well-known name?

 

[heyuting]

Haha, you do think it's a little company? I mean Microsoft.

You are right. Microsoft has made Bill Gates well-known. But you can't neglect that It's Microsoft that made Bill Gates became the most wealthy person in the world. This title also made him famous. Right?

Either well-known or widely known (no hyphen with a work that ends in -ly).
that makes them, or that has made them.

You don't think a little company called Microsoft might have made Bill Gates a well-known name?

 

[heyuting]

By the way, why did you use "W" in capital after the comma?
Thank you.:-D

Either well-known or widely known (no hyphen with a work that ends in -ly).
that makes them, or that has made them.

You don't think a little company called Microsoft might have made Bill Gates a well-known name?

 

[emsr2d2]

Is [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] it correct [STRIKE]If[/STRIKE] if I say:

"Think about Bill Gates and Warren Buffett. Why [STRIKE]they are[/STRIKE]are they[STRIKE]widely[/STRIKE] well-known? It's money​

which makes them famous."​

Please see my amendments to your grammar, punctuation and spacing. I agree with Barb that they are not famous because they are rich.

 

[bhaisahab]

By the way, why did you use "W" in capital after the comma?
Thank you.:-D

The comma should be a full stop.

 

[Barb_D]

When I read it on my phone, I thought it was a full stop.

If Bill Gates chose to pay himself only a modest salary and put everything else into his charitable foundation, he would still be famous.

 

[emsr2d2]

When I read it on my phone, I thought it was a full stop.

If Bill Gates chose to pay himself only a modest salary and put everything else into his charitable foundation, he would still be famous.

And if Apple didn't exist, he would probably still be famous too.

 

[heyuting]

I like this. But the bad thing is Steve's gone.

The new ipad doesn't make me very excited

And if Apple didn't exist, he would probably still be famous too.

 

[heyuting]

It's true. He is a guy who can be successful, no matter whatever he does.

When I read it on my phone, I thought it was a full stop.

If Bill Gates chose to pay himself only a modest salary and put everything else into his charitable foundation, he would still be famous.

 

[heyuting]

Okay, I see. Thank you!

The comma should be a full stop.

 

[heyuting]

Thank you for your amendments and offering a different opinion.

Please see my amendments to your grammar, punctuation and spacing. I agree with Barb that they are not famous because they are rich.