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Eitan462

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Hi, I need Your help, If you can help me...

I have created a post, and people told me the there is a lot of grammatical & spelling mistakes.
If someone can fix them and also to explain this for me I will be grateful.



There are many kitchen gadgets on the markets, tons of different tools, styles and prices, and people tend to follow the 'what's cool and easier' styles...

Well, we've taken what's best at an AFFORDABLE price, and we've created a useful list of gadgets under $15, that will make your life so much easier and much more fun.​
How our prices are so low? We have more than 700 in stock and we purchased them in bulk, meaning - low price. So, we wanted to help and share with you our discount, and pass it to you!​
Gadgets Mall Exclusive - Free Shipping!

#1 - 60 Seconds Fresh And Healthy Salad Cutter


A very fast way to make a fresh and healthy salad, and keep your kitchen clean and with no mess.

  • Safe And Easy To Use.
  • Multifunction - You Can Wash And Cut Your Vegetable With This Bowl.
  • No Need To Clean Too Many Containers.
  • a Very Fast Way.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • BPA Free, FDA Food Grade Materials.
Buy Your 60 Seconds Fresh And Healthy Salad Cutter Here.

#2 - Cool Lemon / Fruit Juice Sprayer - You Must Have!


A handy way to make a lemon / fruit juice spray - make your life easier with this tool!
Use this instead of squeezing a different lemon each time you want some lemon on your food.​
Simply cut a small piece off the top of the fruit, then screw the gadget into the top of the fruit, and your spray is ready!​

  • Easy To Use.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Can Be Used On Any Fruit.
  • Easy To Clean.
Price: $8.79
Our Price: $5.97
Buy Your Cool Lemon / Fruit Juice Sprayer Here.

#3 - Automatic Beer Bottle Opener - Great Tool


Safe, convenient and easy to use - Just push and pull and your beer is ready to be served!

  • Very Fast Way To Open Your Beer.
  • Automatic - Just Push And Pull And You're Done.
  • Easy To Use.
  • It Won't Bend The Cap, You Can Close The Bottle And Use It Later.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Made From Strong HQ Stainless Steel Material.
  • Easy To Clean.
Price: $9.29
Our Price: $7.97
Buy Your Automatic Beer Bottle Opener Here.

#4 - Finger Orange Peeler, Fastest Way To Peel An Orange


If you want to keep your hands clean while peeling an orange, then this tool is your solution. a fast way to peel an orange!
  • Easy And Fast Cutting.
  • Keeps Your Hands Clean.
  • Easy To Clean.
Price: $6.69
Our Price: $5.97
Buy Your Finger Orange Peeler Here.

#5 - 2PCs HQ Collapsible Silicone Colanders


Safe, convenient and easy to use - this colander will make your life easier!

  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Easy To Use.
  • 2PCs Collapsible Colanders - Easy To Store To Save You Lots Space!
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Dishwasher Safe.
  • BPA Free, FDA Food Grade Materials.
  • High Heat Resistance.
  • Color - Red, Green And Orange.
Price: $14.69
Our Price: $12.97
Buy Your Collapsible Silicone Colanders Here.

#6 - 5PCs Vegetables Mandoline Peeler - Great Kitchen Tool


5 Different professional blades, that will help you to cut vegetables into many shapes without any effort - Brings lots of fun to your kitchen!
  • 5PCs Stainless Steel Professional Blades.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Convenient and Easy To Use.
  • Cut Into Many Shapes.
  • Safe To Use - Keeps On Your Fingers From The Blades.
  • Strong ABS Materials.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Easy To Store - Save Lots Of Space In The Kitchen.
  • FDA Food Grade Materials.
Price: $17.49
Our Price: $12.97
Buy Your Vegetables Mandoline Peeler Here.

#7 - Cool Rotate Potato Slicer Tool - You Must Have One!


Use This Tool To Make a Spiral Potato - Perfect For People Who Love Crispy Potato Fries.​

  • 1PCs - x3 Strong Stainless Steel Strings + x1 Plastic Spiral Cutter.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Fast, Convenient and Easy To Use.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Easy To Store.
Price: $12.49
Our Price: $8.97
Buy Your Rotate Potato Slicer Here.

#8 - Vegetable / Onion Holder - Easy To Cut


Easy and handy way to cut onions, or any other vegetable and also to keep your hands clean and with no smell!​

  • Easy And Safe To Use.
  • If You Don't Want To Touch Onions, This Tools Is Your Solution.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Made Of Strong HQ Stainless Steel.
  • Will Help You To Cut Straight.
  • Non-Slip.
  • Easy To Clean
  • Dishwasher Safe
  • Compact - Easy To Store.
  • Food Grade Material.
Price: $8.39
Our Price: $6.97
Buy Your Vegetable / Onion Holder Here.

#9 - Garlic / Ginger Multi-Functional Mini Grinding Grater


Safe, convenient and easy to use - this mini grinding grater will make your life easier!​

  • Safe To Use - Use The Cover To Protect Your Fingers.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Strong Stainless Steel And Plastic.
  • Easy To Use.
  • Small And Easy To Store.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Food Grade Material.
Price: $8.29
Our Price: $5.97
Buy Your Mini Grinding Grater Here.

#10 - Multifunction Julienne Vegetables Peeler


A Great Vegetables Peeler, Will Save Your Time When You Making Salad.​

  • Multifunction Vegetables Peeler.
  • HQ Stainless Steel Material.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Easy To Use.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Dishwasher Safe.
  • Easy To Store / Hang.
Price: $12.89
Our Price: $8.97
Buy Your Multifunction Julienne Vegetables Peeler Here.

#11 - Non-Slip Multifunction Bottle Opener


Fast and easy way to open any bottle within a second.​

  • Great Opener.
  • Multifunction Opener.
  • Non-Slip.
  • Easy And Safe To Use.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
Price: $13.19
Our Price: $8.97
Buy Your Non-Slip Multifunction Bottle Opener Here.

#12 - Professional Cans Opener


Fast and easy way to open a can within a second, and without any effort.​

  • Quick cans opener.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen
  • Sharp Blade.
  • Stainless steel.
  • Ergonomic Design - Easy To Use.
  • Easy To Clean.
Price: $16.79
Our Price: $11.97
Buy Your Professional Cans Opener Here.
 

teechar

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Hi, I need Your help. If you can help me, I'd be grateful.

I have created a poster, and people told me [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] there [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are a lot of grammatical & spelling mistakes.

If someone can fix them and also to explain this for me, I will be grateful.
See below.
 

teechar

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There are many kitchen gadgets on the market (tons of different tools, styles and prices), and people tend to [STRIKE]follow the[/STRIKE] choose 'what's cool and convenient'. [STRIKE]easier[/STRIKE][STRIKE]' styles...[/STRIKE]

Well, we've taken what's best at an AFFORDABLE price, and we've [STRIKE]created[/STRIKE] compiled a useful [STRIKE]list[/STRIKE] range of gadgets under $15, that will make your life so much easier and much more fun.

How can our prices [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] be so low?
We have more than 700 item types in stock, and we purchased them in bulk; meaning - low price. So, we wanted to help and share with you our discount, and pass [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] those incredibly affordable prices on to you!

Gadgets Mall Exclusive - Free Shipping!


#1 - 60 Seconds Fresh And Healthy Salad Cutter

A very fast way to make a fresh and healthy salad, and keep your kitchen clean and tidy. [STRIKE]with no mess.[/STRIKE]


  • Safe And Easy To Use.
  • Multifunction - You Can Wash And Cut Your Vegetable With This Bowl.
  • No Need To Clean Too Many Containers.
  • A Very Fast Way Of Preparing Vegetables.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • BPA Free, FDA Food Grade Materials.

Buy Your 60 Seconds Fresh And Healthy Salad Cutter Here.

#2 - Cool Lemon/Fruit Juice Sprayer - [STRIKE]You[/STRIKE] A Must Have!

A handy way to make a lemon/fruit juice spray - make your life easier with this tool!
Use this instead of squeezing a different lemon each time you want some lemon on your food.
Simply cut a small piece off the top, [STRIKE]of the fruit,[/STRIKE] then screw the gadget into the top of that piece, [STRIKE]the fruit,[/STRIKE] and your spray is ready!


  • Easy To Use.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Can Be Used [STRIKE]On[/STRIKE] With Any Fruit.
  • Easy To Clean.

(Recommended Retail) Price: $8.79
Our Price: $5.97
Buy Your Cool Lemon/Fruit Juice Sprayer Here.

#3 - Automatic Beer Bottle Opener - Great Tool

Safe, convenient and easy to use - Just push and pull and your beer is ready to be served!


  • Very Fast Way To Open Your Bottle Of Beer.
  • Automatic - Just Push And Pull And You're Done.
  • Easy To Use. [STRIKE]
  • It[/STRIKE] Won't Bend The Cap, You Can Close The Bottle And Use It Later.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Made From Strong HQ Stainless Steel Material.
  • Easy To Clean.

Price: $9.29
Our Price: $7.97
Buy Your Automatic Beer Bottle Opener Here.

#4 - Finger Orange Peeler, Fastest Way To Peel An Orange

If you want to keep your hands clean while peeling an orange, then this tool is your solution. A fast way to peel an orange!

  • Easy And Fast Cutting.
  • Keeps Your Hands Clean.
  • Easy To Clean.

Price: $6.69
Our Price: $5.97
Buy Your Finger Orange Peeler Here.

#5 - [STRIKE]2PCs[/STRIKE] HQ Collapsible Silicone Colanders, 2-Piece Set

Safe, convenient and easy to use - this colander will make your life easier!


  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Easy To Use. [STRIKE]
  • 2PCs Collapsible Colanders -[/STRIKE] Easy To Store To Save You Lots Space!
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Dishwasher Safe.
  • BPA Free, FDA Food Grade Materials.
  • High Heat Resistance.
  • Available Colors - Red, Green [STRIKE]And[/STRIKE] or Orange.

Price: $14.69
Our Price: $12.97
Buy Your Collapsible Silicone Colanders Here.

#6 - [STRIKE]5PCs[/STRIKE] Vegetables Mandoline Peeler, 5-Piece Set - Great Kitchen Tool

5 Different professional blades, that will help you to cut vegetables into many shapes without any effort - Brings lots of fun to your kitchen!

  • 5PCs Stainless Steel Professional Blades.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Convenient and Easy To Use.
  • Cut Into Many Shapes.
  • Safe To Use - Keeps [STRIKE]On[/STRIKE] Your Fingers Safe From The Blades.
  • Strong ABS Materials.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Easy To Store - Save Lots Of Space In The Kitchen.
  • FDA Food Grade Materials.

Price: $17.49
Our Price: $12.97
Buy Your Vegetables Mandoline Peeler Here.

#7 - Cool Rotate Potato Slicer Tool - You Must Have One!

Use This Tool To Make a Spiral Potato - Perfect For People Who Love Crispy Potato Fries.


  • 1PCs - x3 Strong Stainless Steel Strings + x1 Plastic Spiral Cutter.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Fast, Convenient and Easy To Use.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Easy To Store.

Price: $12.49
Our Price: $8.97
Buy Your Rotate Potato Slicer Here.

#8 - Vegetable / Onion Holder - Easy To Cut

Easy and handy way to cut onions, or any other vegetable and also to keep your hands clean and with no smell!


  • Easy And Safe To Use.
  • If You Don't Want To Touch Onions, This Tools Is Your Solution.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Made Of Strong HQ Stainless Steel.
  • Will Help You To Cut Straight.
  • Non-Slip.
  • Easy To Clean
  • Dishwasher Safe
  • Compact - Easy To Store.
  • Food Grade Material.

Price: $8.39
Our Price: $6.97
Buy Your Vegetable/Onion Holder Here.

#9 - Garlic/Ginger Multi-Functional Mini Grinding Grater


Safe, convenient and easy to use - this mini grinding grater will make your life easier!


  • Safe To Use - Use The Cover To Protect Your Fingers.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Strong Stainless Steel And Plastic.
  • Easy To Use.
  • Small And Easy To Store.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Food Grade Material.

Price: $8.29
Our Price: $5.97
Buy Your Mini Grinding Grater Here.

#10 - Multifunction Julienne Vegetable Peeler

A Great Vegetable Peeler, Will Save Your Time When [STRIKE]You[/STRIKE] Making Salad.


  • Multifunction Vegetable Peeler.
  • HQ Stainless Steel Material.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.
  • Easy To Use.
  • Easy To Clean.
  • Dishwasher Safe.
  • Easy To Store / Hang.

Price: $12.89
Our Price: $8.97
Buy Your Multifunction Julienne Vegetables Peeler Here.

#11 - Non-Slip Multifunction Bottle Opener

Fast and easy way to open any bottle within a second.


  • Great Opener.
  • Multifunction Opener.
  • Non-Slip.
  • Easy And Safe To Use.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen.

Price: $13.19
Our Price: $8.97
Buy Your Non-Slip Multifunction Bottle Opener Here.

#12 - Professional Can Opener

Fast and easy way to open a can within a second, and without any effort.


  • Quick can opener.
  • Must Have In Any Kitchen
  • Sharp Blade.
  • Stainless steel.
  • Ergonomic Design - Easy And Safe To Use.
  • Easy To Clean.

Price: $16.79
Our Price: $11.97
Buy Your Professional Can Opener Here.
- I don't understand the parts in blue.
- Consider using "recommended retail price" (instead of just "price") as I did for the first item.
- Note that some items do not have price information.
 

Eitan462

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Wow, many thanks!

- I don't understand the parts in blue. | It is one package, with x3 Strong Stainless Steel Strings, and x1 Plastic Spiral Cutter.
60 Seconds Fresh And Healthy Salad Cutter | Make a salad in 60 seconds

So, What should I improve?
Can you direct me to a specific information, that may help me?


I didn't even know that there are too many mistakes.
 
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teechar

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I still don't understand the part about the cutter. What do you mean by three strings? Is it one, two or three gadgets?
For the other part, try something like "60-second" in the heading, and "make a salad in less than a minute" in the description.
 
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