[General] Helpme for writting an outstanding statement for our client

[helpmesir]

August 13, 2013
M/s CCC Company Ltd.
Subject:Outstanding Statement
Dear Sir,
Please view the following mentioned outstanding payment is pending for a pretty long time from your end, which is needed to be cleared as soon as possible:
S. No.	Period	Outstanding Days	Outstanding Amount
1	01-01-12 to 28-02-12	590	$ 4,000.00
	Total Outstanding	$ 4,000.00
Kindly make the outstanding payment of the above mentioned period at your earliest convenience.
We appreciate your prompt action and reply in this regard.
Thanking You.
Your's Truly

K. Mark

 

[emsr2d2]

August 13, 2013
M/s CCC Company Ltd.
Subject:Outstanding Statement
Dear Sir,
Please view the following [STRIKE]mentioned[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]outstanding[/STRIKE] payment [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]pending[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]a pretty long time from your end[/STRIKE] which has been outstanding since [exact date], and which [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]needed[/STRIKE] needs to be cleared as soon as possible:
S. No.	Period	Outstanding Days	Outstanding Amount
1	01-01-12 to 28-02-12	590	$ 4,000.00
	Total Outstanding	$ 4,000.00
Kindly [STRIKE]make[/STRIKE] clear the outstanding payment immediately. [STRIKE]of the above mentioned period at your earliest convenience.
We appreciate your prompt action and reply in this regard.
Thanking You.
[strike]Your's[/strike] Yours faithfully [STRIKE]Truly

K. Mark

See my suggested amendments above.

 

[helpmesir]

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