Silverobama
Key Member
- Joined
- Aug 8, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Yan, an old friend of mine, has been in my online chat group for a while. The main purpose of the group is to inform members about when and where the English clubs meet. A few days ago, I posted in the group that I would be working part-time by driving a taxi, so I couldn’t host the Sunday Club any longer. However, Yan didn’t receive the message. He saw the messages yesterday, and here's part of our conversation:
Yan: Hey, Silver. How’s your cab business doing? I hope you earn a lot by driving taxis. I didn’t check my phone and I noticed that just now you are not going to host the club. Is Sunday’s club still on?
Silver: Thanks a lot for your message, mate. The club still meets every Sunday except this week because the new host is out of town, so, it will be restarted next week.
Yan: Okay, thanks a lot for your information. How about the Wednesday one? I didn’t see anyone in the venue (where it’s held) this week.
Silver: The Wednesday club will meet next week. The host was sick.
Yan: Thank you so much!
Yan: Anytime!
Please help me to correct this conversation to make it natural and grammatical.
Yan: Hey, Silver. How’s your cab business doing? I hope you earn a lot by driving taxis. I didn’t check my phone and I noticed that just now you are not going to host the club. Is Sunday’s club still on?
Silver: Thanks a lot for your message, mate. The club still meets every Sunday except this week because the new host is out of town, so, it will be restarted next week.
Yan: Okay, thanks a lot for your information. How about the Wednesday one? I didn’t see anyone in the venue (where it’s held) this week.
Silver: The Wednesday club will meet next week. The host was sick.
Yan: Thank you so much!
Yan: Anytime!