[Grammar] how to write a good later

[rock565613]

hi sir this is rock..
just now i graduate and got a job in "Consultancy Service "..my company want to write down a official later to a University.to ask university information and medical program of university ...but i don't how to write down a official latter sir would you please help me write down a good later ......


please help me sir


thank's regarded....

 

[emsr2d2]

Hi. [STRIKE]sir[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]this is[/STRIKE] My name is Rock.

[STRIKE]just now[/STRIKE] I recently graduated and got a job in "Consultancy Service". My company want me to write [STRIKE]down[/STRIKE] an official [STRIKE]later[/STRIKE] letter to a university (no full stop required) to ask the university [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] information[STRIKE] and[/STRIKE] about its medical program. [STRIKE]of university ...but[/STRIKE] I don't know how to write [STRIKE]down[/STRIKE] an official [STRIKE]latter[/STRIKE] letter. [STRIKE]sir[/STRIKE] Would you please help me write [STRIKE]down[/STRIKE] a good [STRIKE]later[/STRIKE] letter?


Please help me. [STRIKE]sir [/STRIKE]


[STRIKE]thank's[/STRIKE] Thanks. [STRIKE]regarded....[/STRIKE]

Hello and welcome to the forum.

Before we try to help you with a letter, please look at the changes I have made to your post. In written English, it is important to remember that you must always:

- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with the appropriate punctuation mark.
- Capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).

In addition:

- Do not address the volunteers here as "sir". That only applies to men and many of the volunteers are women. There is no need to address us using any similar word.
- Look at the correct spelling of "letter".

After you have looked at my corrections, then please try to write the official letter yourself and post it here, then we will look at it.

 

[Rover_KE]

You graduated and got a job in Consultancy Services?:roll:

OK.

Start HERE.

Rover