alpacinou
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Hello everyone
I have written about organic farming in two paragraphs. I have some doubts about the underlined parts. I would appreciate your comments.
Chemical fertilizers that are used in non-organic farming can have a detrimental impact on both people and the environment. Organic products are bereft of chemical fertilizers. Not only is organic farming eco-friendly, but it is also the right way to cultivate products from a health perspective.
On the other hand, it has been proven that organic farming methods are not cost-effective. Organic farming requires a larger piece of land and it is also water-intensive. Our country is located in an arid region of the world and is known to be water-stressed and cultivating in an organic way is not practical in this region.
I would really be grateful if you would tell me how I can make this better.
This is a formal writing.
I have written about organic farming in two paragraphs. I have some doubts about the underlined parts. I would appreciate your comments.
Chemical fertilizers that are used in non-organic farming can have a detrimental impact on both people and the environment. Organic products are bereft of chemical fertilizers. Not only is organic farming eco-friendly, but it is also the right way to cultivate products from a health perspective.
On the other hand, it has been proven that organic farming methods are not cost-effective. Organic farming requires a larger piece of land and it is also water-intensive. Our country is located in an arid region of the world and is known to be water-stressed and cultivating in an organic way is not practical in this region.
I would really be grateful if you would tell me how I can make this better.
This is a formal writing.