I personally would never...,

[Silverobama]

I wrote the following comment in the feedback section of a doctor on the website of the hospital. I felt I had been cheated by her. The checkup result shows that I’m healthy and she still gave me 1000 yuan medicine to eat. Please help me with a natural version of it.
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I personally would never recommend you to consult this doctor because she would only prescribe medicine and physical checkup to her patients. Last time, I was prescribed 1000yuan-worth medicine when the diagnosis was just a flatulence.

 

[emsr2d2]

I wrote the following comment in the feedback section of a doctor on the website of the a hospital. I felt I had been cheated by her. The My checkup result shows showed that I’m healthy and but she still gave charged me 1000 yuan for some medicine to eat take. Please help me with a natural version of it.

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I personally would never recommend that you to consult this doctor because she would only prescribes medicine and physical checkups to her patients. Last time I consulted her, I was prescribed 1000 yuan's worth of medicine when the diagnosis was just a (no article here) flatulence.

See above.

Please don't use "I personally". You'll hear it from native speakers but that doesn't make it right. It's tautologous. If you start a sentence with "I", it's very clear you're coming at it from a personal point of view.

 

[teechar]

the feedback section of a doctor​

Does a doctor have a feedback section? We've pointed out to you many times that you should read carefully what you write before posting it to the forum. Of course, there can still be mistakes, but if you read and reread what you write, you'd be able to spot many simple or basic errors.

I personally would never recommend you to consult this doctor because she would appears to be only interested in prescribing unnecessary expensive medicine and physical checkup medicines and tests to her patients.

 

[Silverobama]

Does a doctor have a feedback section? We've pointed out to you many times that you should read carefully what you write before posting it to the forum. Of course, there can still be mistakes, but if you read and reread what you write, you'd be able to spot many simple or basic errors.

Thanks a lot for your suggestion. I'm sorry for not having made myself a better learner here. I'll try my best to do that. Doctors don't have a feedback section, of course. However, her hospital does have one.

 

[emsr2d2]

I have no problem with saying that the doctor has a feedback section on the website. That's pretty much what you said in post #1. It's clear that there is a section specifically for feedback on that doctor.

 

[teechar]

I have no problem with saying that ...

I do have a problem with "I wrote the following comment in the feedback section of a doctor".
That's clearly wrong!
@Silverobama : One way to fix that is to change "of" to "for".