I think the advertiser...,

[Silverobama]

I walked by the downtown and saw this picture. It's an advert which was obviously designed by the advertiser himself. He's a teacher who's been teaching paiting since 2002. The characters read "Remember this "Big Beard" and learn how to paint from him". The figure in the cartoon is the teacher himself in cartoon image.



I said this to my friend by both of us looking at the picture "I think the advertiser is really creative; he not only turned himself into a cartoon but also advertise his service".

Please help me with a natural version.

 

[emsr2d2]

I walked by the was walking downtown and saw this picture. It's an advert which that was obviously designed by the advertiser business owner himself. He's been a painting teacher who's been teaching painting since 2002. The characters read "Remember this "Big Beard" and learn how to paint from him". The figure man in the cartoon is the teacher himself. in cartoon image.

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I said this to While my friend and I by both of us were looking at the picture, I said "I think the advertiser is really creative; he not only turned himself into a cartoon but also advertised his service business".

Please help me with a natural version.

Note my changes above. With my couple of corrections, yours works if that's how you really feel about it. I find it a really weak advert! There's nothing in the image that suggests art or painting and the man doesn't have a particularly big beard.

 

[Silverobama]

Note my changes above. With my couple of corrections, yours works if that's how you really feel about it. I find it a really weak advert! There's nothing in the image that suggests art or painting and the man doesn't have a particularly big beard.

I've been thinking about this for a while. Could you please help me with my new version? Which is more logical:

The advertiser makes a cartoon image of himself so that his prospective students can know how their teacher looks like; it's a creative way to advetise his business though.

 

[emsr2d2]

I'm certain you've been on the forum long enough to know that we don't say "how something looks like". Try again.

 

[Silverobama]

I'm certain you've been on the forum long enough to know that we don't say "how something looks like". Try again.

The advertiser makes a cartoon image of himself so that his prospective students can know what their teacher looks like; it's a creative way to advetise his business though.

Is this version better?

 

[tedmc]

The ad portrays a cartoon character, purportedly an art teacher, with the message, "Remember this beardie. Wanna learn to draw? Look for him!"
I think it is quite creative and fun.