I want to express the idea that a person has mood swings

[alpacinou]

I want to express the idea that a person has mood swings and that is reflected in their facial expressions.

I want to express that a person's lips moved as she smiled and the smile went away. I also want to express how laughter turns into cry.


A smile spread across her face. Then her lips slowly crumpled as she thought about her late husband.

She was watching a comedy. She began to chuckle and it slowly turned into loud, side-splitting laughter. A few seconds later, the memories stifled her laughter and it gave way to a low cry.


I know it needs to be worked on. I would appreciate your suggestions.

 

[Tarheel]

I want to express the idea that a person has mood swings and that is reflected in their facial expressions.

I want to express that a person's lips moved as she smiled and the smile went away. I also want to express how laughter turns into crying.


A smile spread across her face. Then her lips slowly crumpled as she thought about her late husband.

She was watching a comedy. She began to chuckle and it slowly turned into loud, side-splitting laughter. A few seconds later, the memories overcame her and tears ran down her cheeks.


I know it needs to be worked on. I would appreciate your suggestions.

Try that!

 

[Tdol]

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