I wanted to fire my staff. The effective day will be 1 st September.

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Do you think is it natural and offical sentences? thanks you comments here.

I wanted to fire my staff. The effective day will be 1 st September.

 

[emsr2d2]

I am locking this thread. You haven't taken any notice of our previous advice and corrections. You are still trying to write sentences that are too difficult for a beginner. There are too many errors in that post for us to spend time on correcting them.

Also, you currently have five open threads on Ask A Teacher. Slow down! Concentrate on one thread at a time.