I was waiting for your reply.

subhajit123

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Please correct my writing below:

1. "I was waiting for your reply for a long time. I am so glad to have received your message finally. Thanks for sharing your thought with me. Honestly, I'm so worrying about you. I really want to see you and talk to you directly. Should we meet some time this week? If it's possible, suggest a date, time ad place for me."

2. "Promise me, don't hurt yourself"

3. "Release yourself to hear the real voice in your hurt. You don't have to pretend to be strong."
 
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emsr2d2

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Please correct my writing below:

1. "I [STRIKE]was[/STRIKE] have been waiting for your reply for a long time. I am so glad to have finally received your message​. [STRIKE]finally.[/STRIKE] Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. Honestly, I'm so [STRIKE]worrying[/STRIKE] worried about you. I really want to see you and talk to you directly. :tick: [STRIKE]Should[/STRIKE] Can we meet some time this week? If it's possible, suggest a date, time and place. [STRIKE]for me.[/STRIKE]"


2. "Promise me (no comma here) [STRIKE]don't[/STRIKE] [that] you won't hurt yourself."


3. "Release yourself to hear the real voice in your hurt. I don't understand this sentence at all.

You don't have to pretend to be strong." :tick:

See above.
 
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