Ideas for saving the Earth

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keannu

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Title : Ideas for saving the Earth
I have the following ideas for saving the earth.
One is that I will take a short bath to save water. The other is that I will try to walk or ride a bicycle more than riding a car.
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Title: Ideas for saving the Earth

I have the following ideas [STRIKE]for saving[/STRIKE] to help save the earth.

[STRIKE]One is that[/STRIKE] I will take [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] shorter [STRIKE]bath[/STRIKE] showers to save water. [STRIKE]The other is that[/STRIKE] I will try to walk or [STRIKE] ride a bicycle[/STRIKE] cycle more often, rather than [STRIKE]riding a[/STRIKE] travel by car.

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See above.

Having a shorter bath (staying in the bath for less time) doesn't save any water! You still have to use the same amount of water to fill the bath. You either want to take shorter showers, or you will have a bath less often. Both of those use less water.
We don't "ride a car". In AmE, you can "ride in a car" (as a passenger, I believe).
 
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