If we act and think in a certain way

[kuben123]

If we act and think in a certain way,it's almost a cinch we will become that which we think! We are as healthy as we want to be.If you think you are energetic and full of zest,then for certain it will become so.It all lies in cultivating desirable and fruitful thoughts and acting accordingly.

Errors?

 

[emsr2d2]

If we act and think in a certain way, ​(space required after a comma) it's almost a [STRIKE]cinch[/STRIKE] certainty we will become that which we think! We are as healthy as we want to be. (Space required after a full stop) If you think you are energetic and full of zest, (space required after a comma) then [STRIKE]for certain[/STRIKE] it will certainly become so. (Space required after a full stop) It all lies in cultivating desirable and fruitful thoughts and acting accordingly.

Are there any errors?

See above.

Please don't post in bold and please make sure the words stretch all the way across the text box before posting. If you're cutting and pasting, paste the text, highlight it all, and then click "Remove Format" (the second icon on the top line, which looks like two As with a red X).

"Errors?" is not a complete sentence.

 

[emsr2d2]

Kuben, if you have already received an answer on another forum, it is polite to let us know and tell us why you are not satisfied with the response elsewhere. We don't appreciate wasting our time on questions that have already been answered.

 

[kuben123]

The answers provided here http://forum.thefreedictionary.com/p...rtain-way.aspx is not elaborate enough..

tq

 

[emsr2d2]

In what way is it not "elaborate" enough? What was missing from their answer?

What does "tq" mean at the end of post #5?

 

[Tarheel]

Perhaps you think the answer you got at the other place was not complete enough. However, I think it was pretty good. One thing you need to do is follow esmr2d2's advice and space after a comma or period (full stop).

One last thing. Just because a sentence is grammatical that doesn't mean it makes sense.

 

[kuben123]

Thank you for all your answers.

 

[Tarheel]

We are as healthy as we want to be.

Does that mean I can stop taking my heart medicine and just think positive thoughts?

 

[Tarheel]

If we act and think in a certain way, it's almost a cinch we will become that which we think!

Using an exclamation mark does not add meaning that wasn't there already.