Chicken Sandwich
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jun 20, 2010
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Netherlands
In addition, if we have not enough free time when are we going to spend our money?
(CPE Sample script)
I'm reading through a few CPE sample scripts. They are not supposed to be examples of "perfect" English, so I'm trying to find ways in which some sentences can be improved. I would rewrite the sentence the following way:
In addition, if we don't have enough free time, when are we going to spend our money?
Do you agree with this? Do we need that second comma in this sentence?
Thank you in advance.
(CPE Sample script)
I'm reading through a few CPE sample scripts. They are not supposed to be examples of "perfect" English, so I'm trying to find ways in which some sentences can be improved. I would rewrite the sentence the following way:
In addition, if we don't have enough free time, when are we going to spend our money?
Do you agree with this? Do we need that second comma in this sentence?
Thank you in advance.