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beginner93

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Hi,

I am a new member of this forum and I need some help. I have to describe my day in English and I don't have any reviewer in order to develop my English. Can anyone read my text and share its comments ?

Thanks in advance.

Title : Struggling

Today I woke up at a quarter to noon ! It’s a bit frustrating because I have missed two courses actually. But, I was in a good shape and my mood, the crucial factor in the last two years, was correct. In fact I have done a good workout yesterday, and I attended to a course, the first time since 6 days ! As you may have noticed, I am a bit lost in my mind and I have to focus myself on the events which are coming as well as I have to forget the past.

Then I was chilling, failing on my goals, and only at quarter past one , I went out for lunch. I ate a salad and fish, with vegetables and mash potatoes, and for the dessert I had a chocolate cream .

I attend a course of logic afterward. I find myself good, participating in class, but only to have some explanations.
 
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tedmc

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Hi,

I am a new member of this forum and I need some help. I have to describe my day in English and I don't have any reviewer in order to develop my English. Can anyone read my text and share its comments ?

Thanks in advance.

Title : Struggling

Today, I woke up at a quarter to noon! It’s a bit frustrating because I [STRIKE]have[/STRIKE] missed two courses actually. But, I was in a good shape and my mood, the crucial factor in the last two years, was correct. In fact I [STRIKE]have done [/STRIKE] did a good workout yesterday, and I attended [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] a course, the first time [STRIKE]since[/STRIKE] in 6 days! As you may have noticed, I am a bit lost in my mind and I have to focus myself on the events which are coming [STRIKE]as well as I have to [/STRIKE] and forget the past.

Then I was chilling, failing on my goals, and only at quarter past one, I went out for lunch. I ate a salad and fish, with vegetables and mash potatoes, and for[STRIKE] the[/STRIKE] dessert, I had a chocolate cream .

I attended a course of logic afterward. I [STRIKE]find myself[/STRIKE] felt good participating in class, but only to have some explanations.
I do not understand the part underlined.
 

emsr2d2

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You said "I have to describe my day in English". Who has told you to do this?
 
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