In her marriage

[Bassim]

I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Do I need a comma after "husband"?

In her marriage, Anna felt like in a gilded cage, surrounded with great wealth and the insanely jealous husband who controlled her every move.

 

[emsr2d2]

I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural. Do I need a comma after "husband"?

In her marriage, Anna felt like she was in a gilded cage, surrounded [strike]with[/strike] by great wealth and with [strike]the[/strike] an insanely jealous husband who controlled her every move.

See above.