In Thailand

[Gaya87]

Can anyone check my grammatical mistakes? Thank you.

In Thailand, a man masquerades himself to rob a luxury condominium, but instead gets terrorized by a raging spirit of a woman. In Laos, a woman arrives in Bangkok to retrieve a deceased sibling's body. As she arrives back home, her mother suddenly collapses unconscious, and later is terrorized into ghostly possession. In Myanmar, a woman is shocked to find her three-year-old keeps on admitting her husband's constant visit, knowing that he is working in Thailand. She is even more frightened when she starts hearing ghostly voice, which wishes to build a relationship with her. In Cambodia, a Thai man reports a ghostly apparation, but it has always been nullified. Is it real? Or is it a guilt over what he has done in the past?

 

[tedmc]

In Thailand, a man masquerades himself (as a ?) to rob a luxury condominium, but instead gets terrorized by a raging spirit of a woman. In Laos, a woman arrives in Bangkok to retrieve a deceased sibling's body. As she arrives back home, her mother suddenly collapses unconscious, and later is terrorized [STRIKE]into [/STRIKE] by a ghostly possession. In Myanmar, a woman is shocked to find her three-year-old child keeps on admitting her husband's constant visits, knowing that he is working in Thailand. She is even more frightened when she starts hearing a ghostly voice, which wishes to build a relationship with her. In Cambodia, a Thai man reports a ghostly [STRIKE]apparation[/STRIKE] apparition, but it [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] is always [STRIKE]been[/STRIKE] nullified. Is it real? Or is it a guilt over what he has done in the past?

 

[emsr2d2]

It's not "masquerades himself" at all.

A man masquerades as a guest/visitor/priest/plumber ...

If you want to use "himself", then you can say "A man disguises himself as a ..."