A Thailand Movie: Suddenly Twenty

Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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Parn, a stubborn woman in her 70s, who one day learns that her son is planning to send her off to a nursing home. While her mind dwells on that, she gets drawn by a mysterious light which leads her into a photo booth, where she ends up taking a portrait. When she steps out, she finds that she has turned into her 20-year-old self again. With no one recognizing her, she sees it as a second chance at life and decides to take advantage of her new-found youth that she never got to enjoy in her old days.

Short Summary
On the verge of being thrown into a nursing home, a 70-year-old woman gets drawn into a mysterious light which transforms her into a vibrant 20-year-old young woman.
 

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Long Summary
Parn is a stubborn woman in her 70s, who one day learns that her son is planning to send her off to a nursing home. While her mind dwells on that, she gets drawn by a mysterious light which leads her into a photo booth, where she ends up taking a portrait of herself. When she steps out, she finds that she has turned into her 20-year-old self again. With no one recognizing her, she sees it as a second chance [STRIKE]at[/STRIKE] in life and decides to [STRIKE]take advantage[/STRIKE] make the most of her new-found youth, [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] especially as she never got to enjoy her young days before. [STRIKE]in her old days.[/STRIKE]

Short Summary
On the verge of being thrown into a nursing home, a 70-year-old woman gets drawn [STRIKE]into[/STRIKE] by a mysterious light which transforms her into a vibrant 20-year-old young woman.
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. With no one recognizing her, she sees it as a second chance in life and decides to make the most of her new-found youth, especially as she never got to enjoy her young days before.


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With no one recognizing her, she sees it as a second chance in life and decides to live her life to the fullest.
 

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That's okay too.
 
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