hardyweineberg
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- Jun 3, 2022
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- Igbo
- Home Country
- Nigeria
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- Nigeria
These sentences are from my essay:
"In the left side of the art gallery was, from top to bottom, a cafe, a gallery office, and an exhibition room, while in the right side, there were only exhibition rooms."
"Other changes or additions include a lift, which is to the right of the stairs, a ramp for wheelchair, behind the children's area, and an entrance hall, in front of the reception."
1) Is it acceptable and grammatical to use the phrase "from top to bottom" when listing the rooms present in a section of a room?
2) Is the 2nd sentence correctly punctuated?
"In the left side of the art gallery was, from top to bottom, a cafe, a gallery office, and an exhibition room, while in the right side, there were only exhibition rooms."
"Other changes or additions include a lift, which is to the right of the stairs, a ramp for wheelchair, behind the children's area, and an entrance hall, in front of the reception."
1) Is it acceptable and grammatical to use the phrase "from top to bottom" when listing the rooms present in a section of a room?
2) Is the 2nd sentence correctly punctuated?