[General] intimate affection

[Ashiuhto]

Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

My sister is one of the most special people for me in my life. She always helps me with my studies and does some special things for me. She does special cards to me and buy me some things that I want. My birthday is during summer vacation, so my friends don’t give me birthday card. Every year, I usually only receive one birthday card from my sister. She is considerate of others and always thinks about me first. I think she is a nice sister, fine teacher, and good friend. I love her so much. We are intimate affection sisters. She is someone special for me.

 

[lotus888]

My sister is one of the most special people in my life. She always helps me with my studies and does special things for me. She makes special cards for me and buys me things that I want. My birthday is during summer vacation, so my school friends can't give me a birthday card. Every year, I usually receive only one birthday card and it's from my sister. She is considerate of others and always thinks about me first. I think she is a nice sister, a fine teacher, and a good friend. I love her so much. We are affectionate and loving sisters. She is special to me.


how sweet


--lotus