fahad_a11
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Please evaluate my IELTS essay and point out any errors .
Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?
Being as a part of free society, everyone has right to speak freely regardless of any consequences associated with it. Education and media play an important role in creating awareness among the people of the society and realize them about the power of their words. Some people argue that freedom of speech is not necessary. However, others state that it helps in strengthening rules and regulation of the society. I believe that for the betterment of state offices and to eliminate the wrongdoing of society, people should raise their voice freely.
In most of the cases the problems arise when people did not raise their voice for their legal rights in the society. By doing so, they give chance to their opponent to do whatever they want to do. For example, in Pakistan government has increasing the price of food for the last two years, but nobody was taking any stand against government. Recently, people stood up very strongly when government suddenly increases the petroleum prices. They raised their voice on all national and international media and pressurize their state to rollback their decision about fuel prices immediately.
Secondly, everyone has its own view whether other people like it or not. By giving value to people point of view many things can be improved and run in the way people want.
Finally, according to my point of view, we cannot build better society unless we don’t care about the people opinion. That is why freedom of speech is essential in all permitted societies.
Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?
Being as a part of free society, everyone has right to speak freely regardless of any consequences associated with it. Education and media play an important role in creating awareness among the people of the society and realize them about the power of their words. Some people argue that freedom of speech is not necessary. However, others state that it helps in strengthening rules and regulation of the society. I believe that for the betterment of state offices and to eliminate the wrongdoing of society, people should raise their voice freely.
In most of the cases the problems arise when people did not raise their voice for their legal rights in the society. By doing so, they give chance to their opponent to do whatever they want to do. For example, in Pakistan government has increasing the price of food for the last two years, but nobody was taking any stand against government. Recently, people stood up very strongly when government suddenly increases the petroleum prices. They raised their voice on all national and international media and pressurize their state to rollback their decision about fuel prices immediately.
Secondly, everyone has its own view whether other people like it or not. By giving value to people point of view many things can be improved and run in the way people want.
Finally, according to my point of view, we cannot build better society unless we don’t care about the people opinion. That is why freedom of speech is essential in all permitted societies.
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