[Grammar] Is it right or not

[sdalton]

This is my text I think it's need to be correct so help me to edit it

"Not everyone can become a doctor ,because not every has a Knowldge , skill and patience to offer his services selflessly to the patients .."

Can I use No-one instead of not everyone?
Or not every has ..

Thanks

 

[J&K Tutoring]

Welcome, sdalton!

First, a couple of tips to get more and quicker responses:
1. Number your questions. You are asking at least two questions- maybe three as you ask for help generally.
2. It's polite in any culture to say please: This is my text. I think it's needs to be corrected so please help me to edit it.

"Not everyone can become a doctor ,because not every has a Knowldge , skill and patience to offer his services selflessly to the patients .."​

I've numbered your questions:​

1. Can I use No-one instead of not everyone? Well, let's see: 'No one can become a doctor...' Is that what you mean? I don't think so!

2. Or not every has ...? Hmm. Not every what? Not every car? Not every banana? Every is an adjective, so it must have a noun to modify.

You need to name what you mean by every. Obviously we can think 'Not every person...' but you might also mean to say 'Not every man...' or 'Not every Australian...' or something else more specific.
​

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Here are some further corrections to your original sentence:
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Not everyone can become a doctor, because not every has the knowledge, skill, and patience to offer his services selflessly to [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] patients.
a. Learn about spacing around punctuation.
b. Learn about the use of articles (a, an, the). Possibly your native language doesn't use these rather useless little words, but they are important in English.
c. Always check your spelling (knowledge). It's the easiest thing to correct and also the easiest way for a teacher to mark you down!

​

 

[emsr2d2]

[STRIKE]This is my text. I think [STRIKE]it's need[/STRIKE] it needs to be correct so please help me to [STRIKE]edit[/STRIKE] fix it.[/STRIKE]

I wrote the following sentence. Please correct any errors.

"Not everyone can become a doctor no comma here because not everyone has [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] the knowledge, skill and patience to offer [STRIKE]his[/STRIKE] their services selflessly to [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] their patients."

1. Can I use "no one" instead of "not everyone"?
[STRIKE]Or[/STRIKE]
2. Can I use "not every has"?

[STRIKE]..樂[/STRIKE]

Thanks.

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please note my corrections above.

1. No, you can't.
2. No, you can't.

 

[Tarheel]

You can say:

No one can become a doctor.

It's perfectly grammatical. But there's a problem with that sentence. Do you see what it is?

 

[sdalton]

Welcome, sdalton!

First, a couple of tips to get more and quicker responses:
1. Number your questions. You are asking at least two questions- maybe three as you ask for help generally.
2. It's polite in any culture to say please: This is my text. I think it's needs to be corrected so please help me to edit it.

"Not everyone can become a doctor ,because not every has a Knowldge , skill and patience to offer his services selflessly to the patients .."​

I've numbered your questions:​

1. Can I use No-one instead of not everyone? Well, let's see: 'No one can become a doctor...' Is that what you mean? I don't think so!

2. Or not every has ...? Hmm. Not every what? Not every car? Not every banana? Every is an adjective, so it must have a noun to modify.

You need to name what you mean by ​

every

. ​

Obviously we can think 'Not every person...' but you might also mean to say 'Not every man...' or 'Not every Australian...' or something else more specific.
​

Here are some further corrections to your original sentence:
​

Not everyone can become a doctor, because not every has the knowledge, skill, and patience to offer his services selflessly to [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] patients.
a.Learn about spacing around punctuation.
b. Learn about the use of articles (a, an, the). Possibly your native language doesn't use these rather useless little words, but they are important in English.
c. Always check your spelling (knowledge). It's the easiest thing to correct and also the easiest way for a teacher to mark you down!

​

Thanks for your guide and please accept my excuse

My sentences related to all people who wants to be doctor

 

[emsr2d2]

Thanks for your [STRIKE]guide[/STRIKE] guidance and please accept my [STRIKE]excuse[/STRIKE] apologies.

My sentences [STRIKE]related[/STRIKE] relate to all people who [STRIKE]wants[/STRIKE] want to be a doctor.

Note my corrections above. You must remember to end all sentences with one appropriate punctuation mark.

No one can become a doctor = It is impossible for any person to become a doctor = There are no doctors.
Not everyone can become a doctor = Some people can; some people can't

There are people who want to become a doctor but they don't have the relevant attributes.

 

[Tarheel]

Sdalton, you thanked me for my post, but you didn't answer my question. What's the answer to my question?
:?:

 

[sdalton]

I'm sorry man for delaying to answer you
I don't understand .what do you mean ? What kind of problem you mean?

 

[Tarheel]

Sorry for taking so long to answer. What's the question?

See post #4.

 

[emsr2d2]

You can say:

No one can become a doctor.

It's perfectly grammatical. But there's a problem with that sentence. Do you see what it is?

Sdalton, you thanked me for my post, but you didn't answer my question. What's the answer to my question?
:?:

I'm sorry [STRIKE]man[/STRIKE] for [STRIKE]delaying[/STRIKE] the delay [STRIKE]to answer[/STRIKE] in answering you.
I don't understand. What do you mean? What kind of problem you mean?

See post #4.

I think the OP has read the contents of post #4 and cannot see the problem. Sdalton, if you read post #6 again, you will find the answer.

 

[Tdol]

My sentences related to all people who wants to be doctor

Wanting to be a doctor does not mean that a person can ignore grammar.