Is this sentence correct grammatically?

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Mad-ox

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This is the sentence:

He was silent for a few moments, looking at her mildly.







Context:

A man was sitting in front of a woman. They spoke to each other then: He was silent for a few moments, looking at her mildly.
 
The grammar is OK, but we don't normally look at people 'mildly'.
 
Then, should I use : gently?
 
As an NES but not a teacher, I probably wouldn't have used that either.

"contentedly", "quizzically", "lovingly", "thoughtfully" etc maybe?

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R21
 
Mad-ox, A better title would have been 'He was silent for a few moments'.

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