It can't hold heavy things...,

[Silverobama]

I pick up rubbishes along the street as a volunteer every day. My tool (see below) doesn’t work well at all when I want to take a bottle full of water ( or things that are heavy). I wrote this sentence to describe my tool “It can’t hold heavy things or It’ll become twisted”. Is my italic sentence natural?



(Twisted)



(normal)

 

[emsr2d2]

Every day, I pick up rubbishes rubbish along the street as a volunteer. every day. My The tool I use (see below) doesn’t work well at all when I want to take pick up a bottle full of water (or things that are other heavy items). I wrote this sentence to describe my tool this problem:
“It I can’t hold pick up heavy things with it or because It’ll become twisted that makes the tongs cross over”.

Is my italic sentence natural?

"Rubbish" is uncountable.
Your tool is a pair of tongs. Each "arm" is called a "tong".
I wouldn't use "twisted" because that suggests that the two long prongs cross over more than once.