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subhajit123

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Is this sentence grammatically correct:"It would be great If I have an opportunity to work with your company."

Hi everyone, if I want to express my feelings politely, can I use the above sentence?
 

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"It would be great if I had an opportunity to work with your company."
Now it's formally correct in the sense that it's in the right form. But it's not formal, and you normally wouldn't use such a sentence to a potential employer.
 

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Formally, you might say "I would welcome the opportunity to work with you/with your company".
 
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