alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Jane went to the kitchen and came back with a glass of bourbon. Her friends whooped and hollered as she raised the glass with both hands as if it were a sports trophy. She searched the dark room for Harry, her gaze settling on him. "You know what I want Harry?"
"Let me hear it."
"I want to dance on bourbon. I want to dance the night away on bourbon."
Jane went to the kitchen and came back with a glass of bourbon. Her friends whooped and hollered as she raised the glass with both hands as if it were a sports trophy. She searched the dark room for Harry, her gaze settling on him. "You know what I want Harry?"
"Let me hear it."
"I want to dance on bourbon. I want to dance the night away on bourbon."
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