John looked out the window. The slopes were covered in snow.

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Is this correct and natural?

John looked out the window. The slopes were covered in snow. The mountains were curtained by a low ceiling of clouds.
 

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What way do the curtains in your house hang?
 

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Something can't be curtained by a ceiling of anything. Curtains hang in front of something. A ceiling is above something.

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In the previous post, I was trying to explain why I wrote what I wrote in the first post.

If emsr2d2 and jutfrank say using curtain doesn't work that way, then I won't use it.
 

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I understand that you borrowed the use of curtain from that particular text.

What we're trying to teach you here is to be more responsible for your own creative imagery.
 
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