[Grammar] Kevin was lying down in his bed with his notebook on his stomach

Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kevin was lying down in his bed with his notebook on his stomach. He opened a folder and saw photos of Kelly. Suddenly, he closed his laptop, got up from bed and walked to the window of his bedroom to saw the sea."

Thanks.
 

teechar

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kevin was lying [STRIKE]down in his[/STRIKE] in bed with his notebook on his stomach. He opened a folder and saw photos of Kelly. Suddenly, he closed his laptop, got up [STRIKE]from bed[/STRIKE] and walked to the window [STRIKE]of his bedroom to saw[/STRIKE] and started looking at the sea."

Thanks.
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