Koen's long talented as a track-and-field start was finally honored when...

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Koen's long talented as a track-and-field star was finally honored when she won the "Female Athlete of the Twentieth Century" award in 1999. (From a textbook named READ THIS)
Is this sentence correct? What's the subject before the word "was"? As I know, only a noun (or a pronoun) can be a subject. But the words before "was" are "Koen's long talented as a track-and-field start". I don't see there is a word that can function as a noun. (As a track-and-field start is a prepositional phrase, not a noun.) Thanks!

A correction: STAR (NOT START)
 
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"Koen's long talented as a track-and-field start "
This is meaningless. Where did you find it?
 
Isn't there a word missing? Possibly 'career'.

'Koen's long talented career as a track-and-field star was finally...'

BTW, it's 'star' not 'start'.
 
Even with "career" it's not a natural sentence. She may be talented but her career can't be described as talented.
 
'Track-and-field' and 'honored' mark it as not being BrE. The unnecessary hyphens mark it as not being educated AmE either. The spelling mistake in 'start' doesn't help matters. So, it's not surprising that the sentence isn't natural.

Fanny Blankers-Koen was a fantastic athlete, though.
 
"Koen's long talented as a track-and-field start "
This is meaningless. Where did you find it?
It is from a textbook named READ THIS.
 
'Track-and-field' and 'honored' mark it as not being BrE. The unnecessary hyphens mark it as not being educated AmE either. The spelling mistake in 'start' doesn't help matters. So, it's not surprising that the sentence isn't natural.

Fanny Blankers-Koen was a fantastic athlete, though.
Do you natives care about the hyphen? Does the wrongly-used hyphen imply that a person's being educated or not?
 
Lots of native AmE-speakers are uncertain about when to use a hyphen. In the last few years, I've noticed many hyphens showing up where they don't belong; I think this indicates a better-safe-than-sorry mentality.

I personally care about placing hyphens, which somewhat diminishes my pleasure in reading. :)
 
Perhaps:

Koen won the Female Athlete of the Twentieth Century award in 1999 (given by whom?). Thus she was belatedly recognized as the star athlete that she is/was.
 
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