make an investment plan

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Is the following sentence correct and natural?

I made an investment plan that I wanted to earn triple from selling my apartment.
 

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No.

If I understand your meaning correctly, you need to use two sentences to express that.
 

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Something like that?

I made an investment plan recently. Fortunately, I earned the triple values from it.
 

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You didn't just make a plan; you actually invested in property.

I bought a flat as an investment. I sold it for three times what I paid for it.
 
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