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Hemshankar

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Dear all,

I need to send two pictures to my brother when i took in his marriage,

With that, I would like to add few words to explain the moment while i am captured.

Sentence I need you to evaluate : "The moment I captured these pictures with a flawless of love"

Was it correct meaning or need to correct ?
 
Dear all,

I need to send two pictures to my brother [STRIKE]when[/STRIKE] which I took [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at/during his [STRIKE]marriage,[/STRIKE] wedding.

[STRIKE]With that,[/STRIKE] I would like to add a few words on the photos to explain the moment [STRIKE]while[/STRIKE] [strike]i[/strike] [STRIKE]am captured.[/STRIKE] I captured the pictures.

The sentence I need you to evaluate : "The moment I captured these pictures [STRIKE]with a flawless of love[/STRIKE] was of/ pure love."

[STRIKE]Was[/STRIKE]Is it correct [STRIKE]meaning [/STRIKE]or do I need to correct it?
 
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