[General] Once concluded

[suniljain]

Once concluded, both the observations will be consolidated in a report and sent for your review.

Why do we use "sent" in the above sentence?

 

[teechar]

... will be consolidated ... and will be sent ... etc.

 

[Tdol]

observations = comments?

 

[suniljain]

observations = comments?

YES

 

[Tdol]

Are there two comments or two sets of comments? If the latter, I would say both sets of comments.... If there are only two comments, do they need consolidation?